Here the website that
will try to help you to increase your English proficiency. We will learn all skills areas.
You can learn English
better from this website. This website contains the modified material that is
designed to help you to learn English with fun ways. There will be many
pictures, audios, videos, etc which make your learning becomes fun.
First, we will focus
on writing.
1.
Writing
Here, we have a passage about having a picnic. Have a nice reading..
Having a Picnic
On a bright Sunday morning, Jono and Joni went to
a park near a town square. They found it awesome to have a picnic on that
beautiful day. They air was so fresh since Sunday was a car-free-day. No car,
no motorcycle were on the street. The situation was completely quiet and
peaceful. Jono started to unload the stuff for picnic from the basket. There
were many sandwiches and bottles of soft drink. They really enjoyed that. They
started to make jokes and laugh and enjoyed the day. Two hours later, Jono and
Joni decided to go home. They still have assignments to do for Monday. Both of
them really felt happy that day.
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I think the appearance is quite good, but you haven't provide any more media like video, audio, etc. and you should provide them in order to provide more media the students will use.
BalasHapusthe appearance is good but i wanna know what the meaning of dinglish :D
BalasHapusyes this post has no media like audio, video, picture, etc. i think it'll much better if the admin give some media also exercises ^^
nice blog,
BalasHapusyou provide some some menus on your blog and quite colorful.
However, what is the focus of your exercises?
if you want to focus on writing, please provide some exercises on writing not on reading.
way to go! :)
Strengths:
BalasHapus- i do like your web blog layout. it's really interesting for the students.
- the outline is good.
Weaknesses:
- you haven't provided any attachment like video, quiz. or others.
- make sure you provide suitable exercises to reach the goal.
Suggestions:
- it'll be so much better if you finish your materials in this blog.
- make the direction clear so, the students won't get confuse to follow the material you deliver.
anyway, you did a good job ;)
Strengths:
BalasHapus- Your blog is simple and interesting
- You provide some menus, it's good
Weaknesses:
- There's no media like picture, video, or so on
- Lack of exercise
- Lack of explanation
Suggestion
- You may provide some picture, video, or audio, like what you've said in the beginning of this learning material, hehe
- It is also good if you give more clear explanation about the material.